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When she thought nothing was going right,
getting pushed around,
By everyone,
She was was so worn, beaten down
She looked into your eyes.
And she knew
that the simple three words were so hard to say.
She thought she loved you.
You looked at her like no one had before.
As if she were human,
not an animal, a freak.
You made her feel amazing-
so that she couldn't collect enough thoughts to even speak.
It was such a beautiful thing.
The girl was so hard to crack from the shell
of which she hid in.
But you were kind, so the cage doors fell.
You made her something that she had never been.
You were so..different from the others.
You didn't hurt her.
The two of you were in the wrong time and place.
And it seemed so hard to face,
that those blue eyes you hid behind
made something that was so horrible, again kind.
getting pushed around,
By everyone,
She was was so worn, beaten down
She looked into your eyes.
And she knew
that the simple three words were so hard to say.
She thought she loved you.
You looked at her like no one had before.
As if she were human,
not an animal, a freak.
You made her feel amazing-
so that she couldn't collect enough thoughts to even speak.
It was such a beautiful thing.
The girl was so hard to crack from the shell
of which she hid in.
But you were kind, so the cage doors fell.
You made her something that she had never been.
You were so..different from the others.
You didn't hurt her.
The two of you were in the wrong time and place.
And it seemed so hard to face,
that those blue eyes you hid behind
made something that was so horrible, again kind.
Once upon a time, someone made me feel beautiful. They don't even know that they probably kept me living, and I can't thank him enough.
If he only knew.
He loved the same music as I did- and who would have guessed,
He liked the Who, too and he hid 'Behind Blue Eyes'
If he only knew.
He loved the same music as I did- and who would have guessed,
He liked the Who, too and he hid 'Behind Blue Eyes'
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So that was beautiful. The flow is great. I absolutely love the 3rd stanza. I can totally relete to it. Great job. Fellow writer. You can really feel the emotion. It touched my heart.